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Cernunnos by Dan Thompson

The hunting horn

and antlered head

the wildest ride

against the sky

the Hunting Lord

abroad tonight

so come inside

stay safe and warm

the fire abides

and keeps off harm.


You hear the hooves

you hear the dogs

the flashing stag

outruns them all

the oldest game

so deathly real

so come inside

and rest awhile

before your final

weary mile.


Before the farms

and settled life

our lot in life

was this

tonight:

to kill

or die.


The choice we made

could only push

time back a day

for in the end

he comes for all

the hunter thus

becomes the kill.


So take the time

to get some rest

whene’er you feel

the time is best

for all too soon

the hunt is o’er

the darkened moon

laid in the west

and we are gone

and hunt no more.


Bio

Dan Thompson (PhD) is a U.S. Army veteran and former journal editor whose creative and critical work has appeared in a wide range of literary and scholarly journals, including, within the past year, issues of Feral, Canary, Eclectica, The Raven Review, The Good Life Review, Black Coffee Review, Rat’s Ass Review, and Jerry Jazz Musician, among others. In an earlier life, he worked as a music producer for educational videos and as a disc jockey at a country music radio station.

Author's note

Cernunnos was an ancient Celtic god, represented as wearing the antlers of a stag. Although there are numerous visual representations of this deity, not a great deal is known about him. Generally, he is thought to represent “nature” – natural flora and fauna, as well as speed and fertility.

The poem focuses on “the hunt” specifically – on speed, virility, and killing – rather than on the domestic aspects that Cernunnos is sometimes also claimed to represent.

The poem moves quickly; the lines are short and there is a pronounced rhythm – hooves, running feet, the chase.

The third and fourth stanzas are really just one stanza that has been purposely broken – the first half of it constituted by shortened lines that lead (very roughly) to a point: “to kill or die” – the broken stanza indicating an interrupted life, with “die” followed by a period (a “full stop” indeed).