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Kore Speaks by M. Weigel

The oldest versions of my tale claim I am the victim.

I played in the garden, helpless and naive.

The old man stole me, my childhood, my innocence, my body.

Trapping me in a hellscape until the sun confessed and my mother ravished the world with cold.

I, the stupid child, moved myself beyond rescue by eating pomegranate seeds.


Did no one wonder why I ate a few seeds when I had eaten nothing for months?


Some versions imply it was all my mother’s fault.

I was of age, but she kept me young and ignorant.

I knew nothing of the world until the experienced man entered my garden.

It was a quick seduction.

I was initiated into all of adulthood at once and loved my life as a queen.

My mother, however, would not stop piloting my life.

She was destroying the world. I had to do something.

I ate the seeds to see if I could find a way back.


Did no one wonder why I did not send anyone with a message?


More recent versions imply I was impatient.

I was ready but young. Naive. Easily impressed when the handsome god appeared.

I ran off, thinking marriage was soulful looks, gentle caresses, and feeling happy.

I ate the seeds earlier than most people realize. I ate plenty of other food too.

Only too late did I learn that my husband snores.

His table manners are horrific, and Cerberus can be a better conversationalist at times.

My mother knew that I did not yet understand that choices have consequences.


Did no one question why I never had to be dragged to the underworld each winter?


When do I get to be me? Centuries pass. Myths die. Mine doesn’t.

Why do I remain Hades’s victim or Demeter’s child?

I am myself:

A woman in the garden meeting and choosing a man.

A woman who also loves and misses her mother.

A woman who makes the realm of the dead bloom.


Bio

M. Weigel lives and works in Reno, NV. She retells myths and fairy tales and loves exploring science fiction, fantasy, and horror. When not writing, she researches stories in their oldest forms to see how they survive and transform into today’s tales.

Author's note

I have always loved the story of Persephone, and retellings vary from uncomfortable to romantic. In most, Persephone is an object as either wife or daughter, so I wanted to give her a voice. I kept weaving the different traditions together to let Persephone tell her story.