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Rapunzel Triptych by Rosalie Hendon

1. Mother


Unnamed, unknown

with an unwavering faith

in your longed-for child

and a craving for leafy greens

growing just out of reach.

Your daughter bargained away before her birth,

her name not even yours to give.

You reside in a silent house,

reproach and resentment taking root

in the empty cradle,

in the space across the dinner table.


2. Sorceress


Powerful, feared

with your high-walled garden.

You deliver swift retribution,

demanding the thief’s firstborn child.

You cared for her like a mother (you said)

naming her for the purple, bell-shaped flowers

crowning the herb her mother craved.

Until she shone too brightly.

To keep her safe (you said)

you locked her in a tower

with no door, no stair, just the one window.

When she grows up, takes a lover, plots her escape

it is a betrayal you cannot forgive.

You shear her hair, banish her to the wilderness,

pregnant and alone.


Motherhood was overrated.


3. Rapunzel


So lonely, whiling away the hours

singing above the treetops, watching the birds.

A prince was a welcome distraction.


Your powers were in your body:

your hair a ladder

your tears a salve

your fingers weaving your escape


Your downfall was the gap in your education,

understanding your own body,

and venturing to ask the sorceress

why your clothes no longer fit around the waist.


In the wilderness, you gave birth alone.

Raised twins alone.

Found your lover and cured his blindness

with your tears.


Robbed of family, friends, lover,

even the woman who raised you, kept you

You did the unthinkable and survived.

Thrived.

Made it to the shining castle they hold up as our reward.


You were everything you needed all along.


Bio

Rosalie Hendon (she/her) is an environmental planner living in Columbus, Ohio. Her work is published in Change Seven, Pollux, Willawaw, Write Launch, and Sad Girls Club, among others. Rosalie is inspired by ecology, relationships, and stories passed down through generations.

Author's note

I've always been fascinated by fairy tales, particularly feminist retellings of fairy tales. Some of my favorites include Spindle's End by Robin McKinley and Uprooted by Naomi Novik. I enjoyed delving deep into the many folkloric retellings of stories like Rapunzel, noting both the differences and the similarities across cultures and time periods. The Aarne-Thompson-Uther index is an incredible resource, cataloging all sorts of folktales with common elements and themes. For this poem in particular I wanted to explore the three female archetypes we see in Rapunzel and so many other fairy tales: virgin, mother, crone. Hence the triptych, or a series of three "images" that hinge together.